Ahhhhh this is chill.~
Haha, thanks for your review ! I hope it was a bit more gloomy... :p
I like it! Piano might be a bit loud due to where the frequency is, and it could use something to fill in the low-end towards the 2-minute onward mark (low cello or double bass maybe?) But otherwise, it gets the meaning across well, I think.
This sounds really freaking cool. As stated below, everything's coming out clear; it's just that the drive keeps sounding like it's going to erupt into this huge Amen break-ish thing but it never feels as if it... peaks. The percussion you have going currently isn't too bad, though, it sits well in the mix and fits the general style; almost a Paragon-esque thing.
In my opinion, all it needs is a bit of a better... arc, I suppose? More of a build up, bit of a tease of the melody (which you do at the beginning, very nice lead-in) and then have it climax into a euphony of amazeballs.
Yeah I get ya. I does kinda feel like it's supposed to build up into something more. I'm glad I got compared to Paragon since that style is kind of what i'm going for lol
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